Falling:
Imprisoned, while
Hiding-
Eyes, fixed upon
Mountains of madness-
Chained to the sky,
Yellow hued-
Venus, rising:
Looking;
Shadows,
Reflecting pond-
Angry?
Can you
Believe in
Starlight?
Only when I am
Falling from
Mountains of
Madness
Wishing upon a
Star….
falling, rising, looking, visions, madness, mountains. soooo many images in your wonderful verses. in spite of all your illness, you consider creativity as your grace given by God. i shall pray for you. please dont stop writing and painting. it helps us always mentally. God bless you in your endeavours. tony
the stars twinkle bright when the mind is not clouded. this was an enjoyable read. thanks for sharing
Boulevard of promises to apoligize being imprisoned with such thoughts and questions unanswered as you have here depicted and delineated..nice attempt and thought provoking write..
It must be a terrible thing to live that way at times, however it did not affect your poetry, maybe it even has enhanced it.
Excellent write and brevity of words added variety to this piece..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great feel I did get from this poem. Wonderful poem