Impulse Of My Heart Poem by Rini Shibu

Impulse Of My Heart

Rating: 4.2


Just one more time
I wish I could see you
for the last time I can tell you
I want you for lifetime
Because you are mine only mine
You are the impulse of my heart
to pump the waves in my veins
Without you I am dead
If you like to check give a try
But if I am dead you are no more

Tuesday, September 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: alive
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 September 2017

I want you for lifetime Because you are mine only mine You are the impulse of my heart to pump the waves in my veins ............................................ Without you I am dead If you like to check give a try A real, heart throbbing creation...touches the core of the heart...for a lover's heart can only respond to such a sensible vibration..it is evident that very few will be able to read Rini's heart. May God bless this creative effort to reach its real target. Thanks dearest poetess for this splendid effort and for allowing distant neighbours on the same planet to read your lips, and of course, the heart. A huge 10+++++ Regards Subhas, India.

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Rini Shibu 27 September 2017

Thank you subhas for the effort to read this, lovely remarks

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Practicing Poetess 26 September 2017

Such a connection between the two lovers that if one dies, the other dies, too. But this poem also leves the reader wondering- - Why did he leave? Where did he go? How could he leave a love so strong? Very well - expressed, Rini!

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Rini Shibu 27 September 2017

Thanks poetess..No one can leave a love so strong, it's just a poem

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 September 2017

Just one more time! ! Alive! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 26 September 2017

Edward thanks for reading this

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 September 2017

You are the impulse of my heart.. this is the essence of the poem. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 26 September 2017

Thank you so much Kumar for the encouraging words

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Kishore Kumar Das 26 September 2017

Without you I am dead........but if I am dead you are no more... these lines only reinforce the bond between lovers...the impulse of your heart is in tandem with the love.......thanks for sharing....

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Rini Shibu 26 September 2017

Thanks kishore for this lovely comments

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