Rini Shibu

Gold Star - 93,715 Points (1978 / India)

In Awe - Poem by Rini Shibu

A tiny dot in this huge world
Is not so prominent or noticeable
which can be erased and easily swiped
But you decided to choose it as your own
And gave a new shape to shine in your glow

Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual


Comments about In Awe by Rini Shibu

  • Bharati Nayak (7/9/2018 11:25:00 PM)

    A tiny dot in this huge world
    Is not so prominent or noticeable
    which can be erased and easily swiped
    But you decided to choose it as your own
    And gave a new shape to shine in your glow
    - - - - - A wonderful poem with great spiritual insight.
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  • Robert Murray Smith (7/9/2018 11:17:00 PM)

    As a grain of sand on the beaches of life we are washed afresh each day.++10 (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/22/2018 9:24:00 AM)

    A thiny dot!

    The spot of life.

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • (4/18/2018 3:30:00 PM)

    This is a very thought invoking poem about a tiny dot. (Report)Reply

    (4/18/2018 10:39:00 PM)

    Thank you so much Lamar..! ! !

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (4/18/2018 11:31:00 AM)

    Yes, we are all tiny dots in this huge world.
    Yet, we are unique creations of God.
    And each and everyone has a purpose.
    A beautiful and inspiring poem.
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    Rini Shibu(4/18/2018 1:27:00 PM)

    Thank you so much Rose Marie..! ! !
    Rini**

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  • Valsa George (4/18/2018 8:48:00 AM)

    Yes, we are all tiny dots.... yet when God breathes His grace into us, we shine like diamonds! This humility to be aware of our own littleness and the need to depend on God is the first step to grow in spirituality! (Report)Reply

    (4/18/2018 11:25:00 AM)

    Thank you Mrs.Valsa for your wonderful comment

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/18/2018 8:30:00 AM)

    It is really awe that God is a tiny point of light that you have so nicely and astutely inscribed in this poem. The way of your presentation is fantastic and amusing. A beautiful spiritual poem is shared amazingly.10 (Report)Reply

    (4/18/2018 11:27:00 AM)

    Thank you Mr.kumarmani..! !

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 18, 2018



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