Mamta Agarwal

Rookie - 0 Points (March 27,1951 / India)

# In Desolation - Poem by Mamta Agarwal

longing to be held,
cold at night in bed.
Sun whispers, just wait,
don't be desolate
shortly, I herald...

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  • (12/8/2008 8:30:00 AM)

    Very consoling to think of the sun warming the windows of the soul.
    Sometimes brevity is beautiful. This is one of those times. Ten for


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  • (12/3/2008 5:56:00 AM)

    Beautful, when 'cold: will recieve the sun! But in bed Cold is alone. (Report) Reply

  • (11/30/2008 7:15:00 AM)

    The sun does warm the body, but the heart and mind may remain cold;
    Cuddling is an age old therapy, I have often heard it being told! 10!
    - Raj Nandy
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  • (11/29/2008 1:04:00 PM)

    The start of a new day, with lots of warmth and love to hold you. Bob (Report) Reply

  • premji premji (11/26/2008 4:08:00 AM)

    i see a lovely sunrise
    after quite a long time
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  • (11/24/2008 9:26:00 AM)

    well said, Mamta...i liked this piece...10 (Report) Reply

  • Indira Renganathan (11/24/2008 3:43:00 AM)

    Desolation unleashed...great..10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/24/2008 3:42:00 AM)

    Lonely nights are always sad... Andrew 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 24, 2008

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