In Her Wild Blue Eyes Poem by lily peace lago every by to ph

In Her Wild Blue Eyes

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In her wild blue eyes glitters lovely stars.........

In emerald and silky white
a mayhem in me thundered to pour
smooth nerves lit with fire of kisses
and the loveable bites
provoking groan at far in us...

Pouring wet and hot shiverings
cream of skin and joy of blue
featherly lock and the crushing bones
where the universe delighted
and the dark moonlit night
behind the clouds glitter in shy.........

Catching the waist
and the swallow of the ripe fruit
faded faces behind the neck
in smile and shine
in peeling the feathers
restless hands on the waves
lift her in fond
handled with care....
Oh! me in you swimming beyond the universe
in the new world
in her wild blue eyes
always glitter lovely stars.........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Justin Strength 19 November 2009

Smile smile I do even on the second read!

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Justin Strength 19 November 2009

Very nice write, though there are parts I don't understand, I just SMILE..... Wonderful writing!

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Ejaz Khan 27 September 2009

A beautiful write, smooth, senseous and shimmering and most of all remains a sober poem!

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Catrina Heart 25 September 2009

In the pool of feels and images..............Great write! ! !

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Tango 25 September 2009

This is a very sensuous poem, and very well put. Tango.

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