**completely Ludicruous** Poem by lily peace lago every by to ph

**completely Ludicruous**

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Completely ludicrous......

Mountain aquifer the source for us to feed
and we are the author of greed
let the amnesty cry, yet
we are the master of greed....

The blocked resources are our weapon`s at sigh
and disturb the peace at Gaza is way of our life
beyond the seas and at faraway skies
let us bury the peace ever to dry.....

Let the wandering mother for scanty water
between the rubbles find thin flow of life
carrying the filled container in denied legal rights
aquifer first was discovered and got polite words
'Completely Ludicrous'.....
let the famous words spread on earth
where Nature too completely ludicruous.....


(These are the words used by Israli Govt. spoke person Mark Regev called Amnesty claim as Completely Ludicrous for depriving palestenian from water)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Arumugam 10 November 2009

we need a world where we do not take sides but are objective and everyone in the world must have a fair deal...your poem delivers this message of objectivity and justice most eloquently...

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Noel Horlanda 17 November 2009

I like the first stanza, it is with deep meaning and true in its sense. Cheers!

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Kranthi Pothineni 10 November 2009

Meaningful write. Few lines in this write are really composed well. Meaningful.

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Ranjit Ravindran 10 November 2009

'We are the author of greed'.... perfect description. A priceless message Ma'am.

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Eyan Desir 10 November 2009

The message was carried... out bold and eloquent.. Good job

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Priyanka Bhowmick 10 November 2009

a gud msg delivery... well written

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