In Search Of Venom... Poem by lily peace lago every by to ph

In Search Of Venom...

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In search of venom
wandered in the thick grown forest
over the hills, plains and gone to the deserts
to lick the wiper...
in all plains and valleys
and meadows no where
he find venom to lick! !
The deadly snakes and the king cobra
all away by the smell he sprout
having poisonous tongue he killed many
and the tongueless creatures away to live! ! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2009

all away by the smell he sprout having poisonous tongue he killed many and the tongueless creatures away to live! ! ...well lesons to be learnt as we are deadliest onthe earth... but good spirit inthe poemw with good mssage....10 read mine i am disgrace

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Milica Franchi De Luri 27 August 2009

the unleashed humans tongue is more venomous then the serpents poison.

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Antonio Liao 24 August 2009

life has to surrender.... wait is not yet over....it's the desire of pain that makes the whole self be true...... just to die, in order to live.... turn into a sting for the truth....good concept...Thank you and God bless....a 10 +

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Ejaz Khan 13 August 2009

A powerful write, yes the venom of human can be more deadly!

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 12 August 2009

a frightening poem lago...taken as a person who spits venom in his speech...even the snakes want to escape him...short and powerful

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