Goldheart Bird


In My Dreams - Poem by Goldheart Bird

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Animals would live happily in the wild,
Flowers would dance,
And the wind will play ing my hair,
In my dreams

My shoes would glisten
my dress will be a velvet in a golden glow.
And my hair, twisted elegantly in a braid.
In my dreams
My violin, shining in the moonlight; the notes dancing superbly off the string,
In my dreams

I might dream on
But I have cofidence,
That one day, my dreams will be true.


Comments about In My Dreams by Goldheart Bird

  • Shania K. Younce (3/18/2014 8:46:00 PM)


    A very elegant write. It is a beautiful poem. Bien! (Report) Reply

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  • Khairul Ahsan (1/24/2014 11:13:00 AM)


    You have successfully described your wonderful dreams, in that, we all saw your dreams as we read the poem. Well done!
    'And my hair, twisted elegantly in a braid.' - I liked this!
    'My violin, shining in the moonlight; the notes dancing superbly off the string,
    In my dreams' - This is so beautiful, so imaginative!
    'But I have cofidence,
    That one day, my dreams will be true.' - So be it, my dear poet!
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  • Kaelyn Kawai (1/22/2014 7:25:00 PM)


    Your AMAZING. just AMAZING. NO WORDS, JUST AMAZING. (Report) Reply

  • Beach Girl (1/15/2014 11:09:00 AM)


    What a lovely dream GB! It would be fantastic if we could all dream of flowers dancing and wind playing in our hair. I really loved the verse, 'My violin, shining in the moonlight; the notes dancing superbly off the string,
    In my dreams.' Just beautiful.
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  • Bri Edwards (12/30/2013 2:03:00 PM)


    Allison, you didn't REALLY dream all that did you? the other night i dreamed i kept being too slow to catch an elevator in a hospital. hmmm? i don't think it really was meaningful to my life. i rarely remember dreams. check out spelling (a typo is all) in line number 3.
    here's 65 dollars; go buy the dress. what? that isn't enough? good grief! bri :) thanks for sharing. i liked it.
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  • Kanav Justa (12/23/2013 10:42:00 PM)


    , , its good that you dream good, , , i am sick of my wierd dreams that makes no sense, , , ,
    nice write, , keep penning, ,
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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 2, 2013



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