In My He@rt - Forever Poem by tanvi damle

In My He@rt - Forever

Rating: 3.3


The sound of your footsteps was the sweetest music to my ears,
you always managed to make me smile through my tears.
Just the sound of your name was enough to make my heart leap,
I loved to stay awake every night, just to watch you sleep.
Everytime you smiled you always managed to make my heart melt,
and that's the most wonderful feeling I've ever felt.
'I love you' was what you said while taking your last breath,
which made it all the more hard to accept your death.
One thing I know is that you'll always be alive in my heart,
there we'll always be together, not even death can do us apart.
My wedding ring shall never leave my finger,
cuz in my heart I'll be married to you forever.
I'm not gonna cry, not even a single tear,
cuz i know you're still with me here.
I know you're out there smiling down at me,
I'm not alone, you're here to give me company.
Everyday, I dial your number just to hear your recorded voice,
which makes me smile with tears in my eyes.
In my dreams, we shall meet every night,
where we'll sing our song and dance in the moonlight.
I shall live the rest of my life,
on all those wonderful memories that we made together,
and on the promise of our love that will last forever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Whispering Rose 17 March 2010

strong feellings wonderfully expressing a deep wound which i hope heals very soon well done my friend

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you mad my heart beat nice.

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Lovely poem...too good to resist :)

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 17 March 2010

The spirit of true love is well-depicted. In line 11, it should be 'wedding' and not 'weeding' ring, is it not?

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C. P. Sharma 17 March 2010

I salute your poetic skill. You are a born poetess and after the exams you are once again in your natural poetic love colors. CP

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Tom Golding 25 March 2010

A lovely work that flows well and invites the reader to share your emotions rather than thrusting upon them.

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Kesav Easwaran 24 March 2010

nice work...well versed

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Aira Olayvar 21 March 2010

Woohhhh… what a love! It’s well-written! The emotions were well expressed. I’d loved the way you wrote it… though, I knew, one day soon… your door will again open another love after another… if the person in the poem has already left to heaven… for sure, he/she will never gonna let you be alone and give you another company. Though, it will not mean that you will just forget him/her… neither you love that love the less.

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Aira Olayvar 21 March 2010

Woohhhh… what a love! It’s well-written! The emotions were well expressed. I’d loved the way you wrote it… though, I knew, one day soon… your door will again open another love after another… if the person in the poem has already left to heaven… for sure, he/she will never gonna let you be alone and give you another company. Though, it will not mean that you will just forget him/her… neither you love that love the less.

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Jake Shelvey 21 March 2010

Really well written and sweet, well done!

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