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A vital message you gave Geetha very aptly through this story telling. I loved it.... very nice

So many times we are missing goden opportunity but we r made so can not avoid. I like to mention here that your most of the creations are based on your personal experience which you never miss. This is your great achievement.

Wow! great write. Loved your friends encouragement and your incredible thoughts and imagination

Opportunity comes and goes and one needs to seize it........Geetha........a moment lost is not found again.............. again a great piece

The poem gives a simple message that whenever an opportunity presents itself, grab it. But most of us ignore the concept to take right action at right time. The poem also highlights that even if an opportunity is an illusion, yet it is worth considering without losing heart. Lovely poem. Enjoyed reading it.

very true....some times we may miss a good opportunity in terms of confusion....like it..............

Again a mesmerizing poem Geetha.

The unconscious desires often play such nice games, I don't know a poet who is not a day dreamer. I am myself a day dreamer and my day dreaming makes me a hero of so many lovely stories. My unfulfilled desires make my life a fairy's dream.