Rimni chakravarty

Gold Star - 5,774 Points (08/04/1970 / Siliguri)

In Quest Of Warmth! - Poem by Rimni chakravarty

It is cold
I am unable to hold
Myself from seeking warmth
I seek for the woolen clothes
I seek fire to protect myself from the hard blows
Of the winter
Spring is very far
What do I do?
I can lament of no use
Coz the chill is sure to last and this is true
Can one change the season
It will play though you have many a reason
To go for a change
You cannot for long or short range
Nature is there to take its course
Humans can never succeed though apply the force

I can only seek comfort by keeping pace with season
I stand by the gas oven with one reason
To be in my comfort zone
I smile to stand alone.

Topic(s) of this poem: winter

Form: Blues Poem


Poet's Notes about The Poem

chill waether

Comments about In Quest Of Warmth! by Rimni chakravarty

  • (2/11/2017 10:53:00 PM)

    To be in harmony with nature's manifestations and seasonal changes therein is secret of maintaining one's comfort zone. Great poem. Congrats on its poem of the Day. (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (2/11/2017 9:37:00 PM)

    What a comforting poem that has warmed my heart.
    Congrats on being selected....
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  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (2/11/2017 8:23:00 PM)

    Yes, keeping pace with the season makes one comfortable. That is the reality, as far as nature is concerned. Beautiful write in every sense. Congrats for being the member's PoD. X (Report)Reply

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  • Kevin Patrick (2/11/2017 3:01:00 PM)

    You capture the desolation of the season well, the power of its brooding presence always lurks, while it is one of my favorite seasons, I see it through our eyes, its merciless sadness. Wonderful poem! (Report)Reply

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  • Christina Simmons (2/11/2017 11:22:00 AM)

    I really liked your poem, it has certainly got me thinking of something I've never given thought too.
    It's hardly surprising it was chosen as poem of the day. Well done!
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  • Soumita Sarkar (2/11/2017 11:17:00 AM)

    such a nice write........we like comfort zones.....True. (Report)Reply

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  • Bharati Nayak (2/11/2017 8:47:00 AM)

    I can only seek comfort by keeping pace with season
    I stand by the gas oven with one reason
    To be in my comfort zone
    I smile to stand alone.
    - - - - - - - - A lovely poem- - - - Your idea to keep near the gas stove to keep peace with the season is really wonderful.Congratulations for the poem selected as Poem of the Day.
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  • Clarence Prince (2/11/2017 7:57:00 AM)

    Winter!
    Nature is here to take its course...
    Can one change the season?
    Truly I wish I could lengthen the summer!
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  • (2/11/2017 4:32:00 AM)

    warmth? it is what we all seek? a well written poem of some of the ways to find it. (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (2/11/2017 3:06:00 AM)

    Ace, race! To embrace life. Keeping pace with the season. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report)Reply

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  • Chinedu Dike (2/11/2017 2:49:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem nicely brought forth in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Rimni. (Report)Reply

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  • Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (2/11/2017 2:47:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem Rimni. Congratulations on being member of the day.
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
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  • Indira Renganathan (2/11/2017 2:02:00 AM)

    Very practical....congratulations on poet of the day- 10++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Anil Kumar Panda (2/11/2017 1:53:00 AM)

    Yeah it is the reality of winter. Though one tries much one can't escape the cold totally. A very nice poem with a nice flow. Congrats on being selected as the poem of the day. (Report)Reply

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  • (2/11/2017 12:58:00 AM)

    To feel the warmth
    Of the hot sun
    On a cold day

    Congrats on Poem Of The Day!
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  • Kishore Kumar Das (2/11/2017 12:49:00 AM)

    Congratulations Rimni......for your poem being selected as the poem of the day.... (Report)Reply

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  • Drtony Brahmin (5/10/2016 5:30:00 AM)

    I can only seek comfort by keeping pace with season
    I stand by the gas oven with one reason
    To be in my comfort zone
    I smile to stand alone. to be in my comfort zone, in the warmth..... nice poem.....those who have experienced winter in cold countries will understand this poem very well. thank you dear poet. tony
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  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/15/2016 4:17:00 AM)

    I can lament of no use
    Coz the chill is sure to last and this is true
    Can one change the season
    It will play though you have many a reason
    To go for a change
    You cannot for long or short range

    The bet lines of the poem.
    Keep writing.
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  • Kishore Kumar Das (4/13/2016 1:42:00 AM)

    when winter is there, can summer remain far behind.......nice lines by you.. (Report)Reply

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  • Nosheen Irfan (12/19/2015 5:49:00 AM)

    Nature is there to take its course..a realization of the limits of man. We can all relate to the uncomfortable feeling that cold causes. A good read. (Report)Reply

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