but now the lake of words is dry
the eyes produce no rain
from clouds of thoughts
the pink flamingo
of my nose bows down
to reach my mouth
i do not keep the silence
i do not... but guess
the silence keeps me...
or may be not...
Wonderful poem! I dwelled on the word silence in English language and was sorry it refers to the state of mind like 'I am silent' but never to the process unless it requires an object 'He was silenced'. Wonderful writing in terms of everything especially in terms of going back to the meaning of speech itself. Just look at all the thoughts you've given me :) thanks.
Your poetry is unique.The verses are pure beauty but What is between them is as exciting Please keep writing poetry
So you have writers block? Or you did! lol Beautifully put 2nd stanza! lol Thi imagery is startling and the conclusion, refreshing. The title? Mmmmmm Smiiling at you Tai
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Oh I do love reading your words. Have missed your poetry dear One, and you. HG: -) xx