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In The Dark Forest


In the dark forest
The brave man
Of the bright and superior world entered,
The atmosphere was very mysterious,
Suddenly he heard
Someone was crying bitterly
From the interior region of the forest,
The courageous man proceeded towards that place,
After a while he reached there
And saw a lean and pale shadow crying
In deep pain and despair,
The enthusiastic man asked the shadow,
"Why are you crying? "
The wretched shadow replied,
"I am crying due to the darkness of my inner self,
Rescue me from this dark and inferior condition
And take me to your enlightened world soon."

Topic(s) of this poem: pain

Form: Free Verse

Comments about In The Dark Forest by ANJANDEV ROY

  • Varsha MVarsha M (5/28/2020 8:39:00 AM)

    Wow darkness of inner self do well penned as a story of dark forest who wants to the soothing and delivering light. Beautiful. Admirations sir(Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (5/28/2020 7:31:00 AM)

    A well crafted excellent poem....10+++(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 28, 2020

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 28, 2020