Dave Alan Walker

Gold Star - 10,701 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

In The Not So Distant Future - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Can you hear me
can you see me
can you feel me
listen to what I have to tell you

I'm from the year 2022
don't be afraid
please don't be scared

A coalition government is trying to merge
frantically shape-shifting into something
that resembles the human form

Fragments of breath
traces of life
hearts beating

They will find you

Topic(s) of this poem: time

Form: Free Verse

Comments about In The Not So Distant Future by Dave Alan Walker

  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (7/25/2019 8:38:00 AM)

    Hi Dave, i am from 2025 and yeah we met at London Bridge before...remember it just last year 2024...and we talked about this..Hahahaha joking... Well dear, i just want to say your idea is really cool and amazing...hope u and all are fine there...see u in 2024 hahahaha (Report)Reply

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  • Hans VrHans Vr (2/15/2019 6:14:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem. The greed will crash down like an avalanche of snow, melting in the lake, leaving behind lofty peaks and hills filled with the greenery of wisdom and kindness. (Report)Reply

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  • Bryony SheldonBryony Sheldon (1/26/2019 7:51:00 PM)

    I love it, despite how real this poem will become. Thank you for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Glen KappyGlen Kappy (11/7/2018 8:09:00 AM)

    Hey, Dave! After seeing your comment on my poem, So Soon, I thought I’d check out your poems and began with this one. Thinking ahead to the future is one way to keep hope alive amidst our current political situation! -Glen (Report)Reply

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  • Fiadh FidaFiadh Fida (11/7/2018 7:54:00 AM)

    Sounds fore casting, thanks for sharing the poem (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (11/6/2018 5:19:00 PM)

    Fragments of breath wonderfully traces life. The beauty of beating of heart can be heard when we feel the beauty. When we can see the things of righteousness. A brilliant poem is very interestingly penned.10 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 6, 2018

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