Little
rose,
roselet,
at times,
tiny and naked,
it seems
as though you would fit
in one of my hands,
as though I’ll clasp you like this
and carry you to my mouth,
but
suddenly
my feet touch your feet and my mouth your lips:
you have grown,
your shoulders rise like two hills,
your breasts wander over my breast,
my arm scarcely manages to encircle the thin
new-moon line of your waist:
in love you loosened yourself like sea water:
I can scarcely measure the sky’s most spacious eyes
and I lean down to your mouth to kiss the earth.
in love you loosened yourself like sea water: I can scarcely measure the sky’s most spacious eyes and I lean down to your mouth to kiss the earth. Beautiful poem. Nicely written.
Not bad for a modern Romantic, in some of the best poems in Spanish ever written and in modernity clad.
suddenly my feet touch your feet and my mouth your lips: you have grown, your shoulders rise like two hills, your wander over my breast, ..............................Amazing words, beautiful and bit and that from the famous Neruda, WOW! Congratulations to the family of the great poet. May he Rest in peace. God Blesses.
my word E.R.O.T.I.C. is censored, look above, empty space, byt this word must be in between those two words....bit e.r.o.t.i.c. and that for the Great Neruda. I have seen and observed, IF I write this in this way, no censor at all. Thank you!
suddenly my feet touch your feet and my mouth your lips: ...............
Beautiful poem. Love the way immensity is looked from a tiny prism, widening, rising high to embrace the cosmos.
Awesome I like this poem, check mine out