In Zigzag Starry Wind Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

In Zigzag Starry Wind

Rating: 5.0


Travel you travel oh dear
Dear stars you travel sure
I am waiting for you to see
Wind is blowing here to treat.

In this zigzag path you see
Every rise of sun is fortune
Monsoon dances near bush and
Sky shines with deep hopes.

In this zigzag path you feel
Every leaf of tree is mercy
For all creatures he writes
According to action you get.

Zigzag starry wind kisses top
Each blow touches mind more
You stars you love to shine
In this eternal path we love.

Friday, July 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 01 July 2016

To live a life is itself a path which is zigzag and your poem made it so meaningful with a special ouch of spirituality Awesome 10+++

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Dogma Daniman 20 October 2020

Your zigzag starry wind is motivational wind. We find it with values and ethics. This poem is lovely one.

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Bharati Nayak 30 August 2019

In this zigzag path you feel Every leaf of tree is mercy For all creatures he writes According to action you get. Such a wonderful poem of faith.I particularly like the line- - Every leaf of tree is mercy.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 July 2016

Blowing here and there with the muse of life. Nice work.

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in the eternal path, last stanza is mind blowing, thanks for the share poet perfect 10

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Kelly Kurt 01 July 2016

Mohammed is right; life is one big zigzag path.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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