Do I miss you more?
Your words absent
Hollow space on white page
Where our love
Unwritten, denies all being.
Do I miss you more?
Your words painting
Masterpiece of passion
Where our love
Unveiled, reveals its truth.
Could I miss you more?
The silence falls
Etched beneath life's vellum
Where once love
Unrestrained, bloomed vivid hue.
Ah yes... the burdens on modern day life... very well expressed and captured, Maggie... Terry
.............the last stanza is so powerful....yes silence speaks very loudly.... when once two people were so in love they couldn't get enough of each other...
The poem is beautiful, the note thoughtful and the title, of course, is wonderful! I have a poem titled 'Our Lost Treasure Trove' in which I said how I missed the handwritten letters of my love. If you have time, please go through it and say a few words if you like.
HI, MAGGIE. I ENJOYED YOUR POEM AND I VOTED FOR.GOOD LUCK.
good poem with beautiful expressions bringing more feeling.....
Maybe love is more secure on paper! I often take a Book to bed, ho, ho ho!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful poem, Maggie. Lucky feller to have you miss him like that -.he shouldn't give you the chance to.