~ Inebriant Universale ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

great a10. a cry for content.a keen desire to be satisfied 'sip and lap ' words to try to contain or(inhale) the sheer desire to live. enjoy it very much.thx for invite

the universe indeed always interesting to in tell about in your poem made satisfaction against the universe by inhaling the universe and keeping always his freshness then will make us calm. Good write 10/10

meaningful and so so good to the ears

Reminds me of the famous Rabindrasangeet 'pran bhoriye more aro aro aro dao pran'. Beautiful and sublime. Thanks for sharing.10++++

A very heart warming and heart felt poem that inebriates the universe. Good Write NIV. Your friend Lynn

A good prayer for nectar that will give eternal life to understand some the universal God's creations.

Wonderful poem having a lot of wisdom and depth. The ideas are interesting and the style is innovative. I liked the poem. Nice write.

Nectar of life the wonder why we are here I too booze with getting drunk with fresh air.................as I write I view the wonder of life on TV showing the birth of a baby elephant..luvli coincidence Niv...regards...10/10

I love the way you express you word. To be fulfilled is the high of life. Great way you set it all up and end it.

I love the way you heal language especially the word 'booze'.