Inequitable Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Inequitable Love

Rating: 5.0


No wonder this moon is in love with the earth,
Together, they do the tango dance every night,
Holding the moonbeams these pines leaf shine,
The wave of the sea lifts up erotically,
Igniting the fire in the lover's heart.

A light of the love spread across the meadows,
Where firefly makes a sparkling splash,
On the quivering dew drops hanging on the petals,
Falls gently on the grass by slow wind blows,
Jungle vines, making decorated marquee.

A distant love between the two,
Makes everything that grows on earth excited,
Even moon gains altitude and tidal effects,
A true love by the two bodies without a hug,
Some points to ponder on for this inequitable love.

Wednesday, June 23, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: affinity and love,philosophical,moon,earth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak S S 24 June 2021

Though may look far from reality and realization yet it is soothing when one count it in lovers term. Wonderful poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 June 2021

2) BUT I forgot ONE thing YOU are a poet and with our poetic art, we can write as many poems as we wish, Yiou are very RIGHT, Mr. Asim Sir! Scintillatingly written!

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Anjandev Roy 24 June 2021

Such a wonderful write....

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Varsha M 23 June 2021

Role of music meant for our life. It's just blessing to have a company making like beautiful and better. Beautiful composition sirji.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 June 2021

1) in such a relationship, the justification cannot be realized, really not, but you did cut a nice poem out of it and that counts! 5 Stars full for this enjoyable poem. Love is my theme but not in this situation,

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Darren Jkoeryo 26 June 2021

Enjoyed this surreal poem.

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Michael Jack 25 June 2021

Creative thinking and fabulous writing.

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Mamta S 25 June 2021

Awesome poem, immortal love between the celestial bodies, never thought that way now will.5*

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Loved this Tango dance of the moon and the earth! Marvellous! Top, top marks

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Excellent poem. Liked it TRE

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