Manonton Dalan

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Ing >>> - Poem by Manonton Dalan

I know island thing
with tiny clothing
under trees smoking
passing time nothing
waiting for check came
spend it all on drinking

when night fall do something
we run around street selling
to tourist hungry for exciting
maybe one of you I met walking
I know you did am not telling
cause you're very nice; willing

Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle


Comments about Ing >>> by Manonton Dalan

  • Captain Herbert Poetry (12/22/2015 11:16:00 PM)


    ...a very nice poem with the ing. Intelligent (Report) Reply

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  • Paul Warren (12/9/2015 7:29:00 PM)


    Clever use of the ing at the end of each line. Conveys an air of the usual. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 9, 2015



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