Born innocent
Into such sin
Innocently
We traverse life
So sinfully
Now innocence
Guilty of sin
A good poem that to me sounds like a ring, the start and the end is met at one point, a good reminder and a conclusion...and the content is nice toooo..
Soul, thank you so much for your positive constructive criticism.
innocent the natural born but earthly life drags to illusion and makes the innocent greedy oh the greedy the S I N guilty!
We traverse life So sinfully Now innocence Guilty of sin....this is the truth
Howard Simon is a great motivational poet. Richard, just like you, i am highly inspired by his poems too. Though i have not written a poem yet, i plan to in near future. Yes, born innocent we traverse through a series of sinful existence. Innocence itself suffers guilt of sin. Brilliant write, Richard.......10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A perceptive poem dear poet friend. Thank you so much for your comments on my poems. I am not in a mood to reciprocate now. I am indebted to you!
You are very welcome. Hope you're feeling better soon. Dillip, I'm the one who is indebted to you. From the very beginning, you have been a source of great strength for me. Don't even know where to begin in thanking you!