Innocence Lost Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Innocence Lost

Rating: 5.0


Once children
Now adults
Innocence
Lost in time

Wednesday, February 1, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 02 February 2023

A concise and insightful composition. A beautiful creation...

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Richard Wlodarski 03 February 2023

That means a lot to me, Chinedu!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 02 February 2023

Something you gain. And lose something. Great philosophy in just four lines

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Richard Wlodarski 02 February 2023

Succinctness has not been a forte of mine. I'm striving to reach it through my poetry. THX for your positivity, Kesav!

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Nosheen Irfan 02 February 2023

Life takes away the innocence. Time is ruthless. Sad reality articulated well.

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Richard Wlodarski 02 February 2023

What we do with that innocence over the course of our lives is what matters. Time can make or destroy us. Nosheen, THX for your insightful comments and positive appraisal.

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M. Asim Nehal 02 February 2023

And time is cruel... Fantastic poem.

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Richard Wlodarski 02 February 2023

Greatly appreciate your enthusiastic response, Dr. Nehal!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 02 February 2023

child is equal to innocent! is equal to guilt! ? ?

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Richard Wlodarski 02 February 2023

The natural childlike innocence and spiritual wisdom of a Gerard Kerouac has been eroded over the course of time. We only experience guilt if we haven't learned from that innocence.

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