Monday, September 7, 2020

Insecurities Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shed the robes of grief
Embrace your life
With the most wonderful robes
Let the flame of expectation consume
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Nabakishore Dash 30 December 2021

Embracing life as it comes would definitely protect us if optimistic. Excellent write.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 December 2021

A powerful little work.... highly expressive. Superb!

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Nosheen Irfan 20 September 2020

Wow a short but sterling piece. Thank you dear for warming my heart. I needed this light.

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Anjandev Roy 07 September 2020

the flame of expectation.........significant.....thanks for sharing......anjandev roy.

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Kostas Lagos 07 September 2020

Let the flame of expectation consume The night's insecurities. Perfect!

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Rajnish Manga 07 September 2020

Nicely articulated poem. This carries the sunshine of positivity all around and to embracing one's life is a precondition. The light will remove all darkness and will eliminate any scope of self-abnegation. With this new found confidence, the pall of insecurity will soon wither away. Reading your poems are like sifting through a book named LIFE with its myriad shades and hues on each subsequent page. Thanks a lot.

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Varsha M 07 September 2020

Flames of expectation Adieu darkness as past Over the time, that it housed Spattering delight As luminance reigns again. Beautiful words ma'am.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 September 2020

A well written poem. Truly impressive...10++++++

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