Inseparable Poem by Rini Shibu

Inseparable

Rating: 5.0


She presumed his presence
On sunny day
But he was with an umbrella
On a rainy day
He proved to be a true
gentleman
But it took time for her
to realise
She crawled back to him
before it's late
She served him a glass
of wine
And his favorite food
to dine
They danced together
whole night
And hugged each other
with their inseparable love

Thursday, May 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: rainbow,sunshine
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 24 May 2018

A romantic write throughout the night.+++10

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Rajnish Manga 24 May 2018

Inseparable love reflects itself through mutual concern and care today, tonight and every day of life. Thank you, Rini, for such a brilliant piece of writing. God Bless You.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 May 2018

A sweet little romantic poem Rini! Appreciated........10

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 May 2018

She crawled back to him! ! Love and art. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Lamar Cole 24 May 2018

This is a very nice poem about inseparable love.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 April 2023

The dance continued for the whole night... wonderful

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Unnikrishnan E S 06 August 2019

Yes, love is about sharing happiness. But it is equally about sharing sorrows too.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 May 2019

Inseparable love creates a deep bond between two. A beautiful romantic poem is touchingly inscribed. Thanks for sharing dear Rini.

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Aqua Flower 06 June 2018

Love and care is much more than just a moment! This is a beautiful piece of poetry that speaks volumes!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 May 2018

ooooo what a wise woman a bird in hand is worth a million in a bush ask the world is u wush

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