M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,355 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Insomnia - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

This loss is the gain of life
As my mind and body
Both love to awake
In tandem, since you
Occupied that special place
Where dreams are elusive
And nerves chill the blood
And eyelids standstill
Like Crane on one leg
Patiently waiting for fish
Clock in cloak of mirage
Peace of mind in pieces
Bed is sheet of whip
Uncovering the sleep
Two twinkling stars are
Far from deep sea.

Topic(s) of this poem: insomnia, life

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Insomnia by M. Asim Nehal

  • Akhtar Jawad (11/26/2015 11:46:00 PM)

    This loss is the gain of life
    As my mind and body
    Both love to awake
    A nice idea, a lovely way to convince that even pains have a positive point.
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  • (11/26/2015 7:08:00 AM)

    We all go thru this insomnia at some point in time in life, you explained it in simple and lucid style.God bless u. (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (11/26/2015 12:39:00 AM)

    I agree with Kelly Asim. An insomniac for four years, I have seldom read insomnia descibed better.. Thank you for sharing.. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/25/2015 3:58:00 PM)

    Peace of mind we search still in deep emotional state or expression. This is very deeply described poem shared with wise motive.10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/25/2015 3:02:00 PM)

    A fascinating description of insomnia. I have suffered it for decades.
    Thanks, Mohammed
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 25, 2015

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