Insomnia Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Insomnia

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This loss is the gain of life
As my mind and body
Both love to awake
In tandem, since you
Occupied that special place
Where dreams are elusive
And nerves chill the blood
And eyelids standstill
Like Crane on one leg
Patiently waiting for fish
Clock in cloak of mirage
Peace of mind in pieces
Bed is sheet of whip
Uncovering the sleep
Two twinkling stars are
Far from deep sea.

Wednesday, November 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: insomnia,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 26 November 2015

This loss is the gain of life As my mind and body Both love to awake A nice idea, a lovely way to convince that even pains have a positive point.

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T Rajan Evol 26 November 2015

We all go thru this insomnia at some point in time in life, you explained it in simple and lucid style.God bless u.

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Souren Mondal 26 November 2015

I agree with Kelly Asim. An insomniac for four years, I have seldom read insomnia descibed better.. Thank you for sharing..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 November 2015

Peace of mind we search still in deep emotional state or expression. This is very deeply described poem shared with wise motive.10

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Kelly Kurt 25 November 2015

A fascinating description of insomnia. I have suffered it for decades. Thanks, Mohammed

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