Interesting View Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Interesting View

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While we view this
This is amazing universe
We talk each other more
About this Earth we think
We try to link with secrets
But we do not get way to do
When light sparks in lap
Of cloud we feel this new,
The vision of theme is nice
The secrets of creations are
Not so far from us we see
We realize this and that too
While we wander in open mind
We feel and stand with courage
The movement of life we see
In each street we realize
The new essence speaks here
To withstand with movement
In this garden of God we pray
To get liberation from sorrow
And pain does not touch us
While God gives his grace.

Saturday, October 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual,life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 17 October 2015

Interesting thoughts, inspire to think over and over again. It's up to the other one to see what one likes to see. You as a poet have done your part. Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 17 October 2015

Beautiful words about the wonderful life and the nature around us. Thanks for sharing the poem. I quote: In this garden of God we pray / To get liberation from sorrow.

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M Asim Nehal 17 October 2015

Superb poem, Inspiring in all ways, this world is a wonderful place to live in and see the sorrow, joy, pain, gain, love, hate, name, money, defame etc.....Life teaches everything.10++++

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Lubinda Lubinda 19 October 2015

Its awesome how one can get peace of mind and relaxation from observing nature. It's awesome that God uses nature to give us peace! Awesome poem!

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Valsa George 19 October 2015

'In this garden of God we pray To get liberation from sorrow '............ Yes, all our prayers to God are aimed at liberation from sorrows! When trials and tribulations come into our life, the only one to whom we can turn for help is God! Fair write!

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Sanjukta Nag 18 October 2015

In this garden of God we pray To get liberation from sorrow And pain does not touch us While God gives his grace. A very wise and spiritual thought. Great write!

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Akhtar Jawad 18 October 2015

While we view this This is amazing universe We talk each other more About this Earth we think A nice write.......

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Kelly Kurt 18 October 2015

A wonderful piece of writing again. Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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