Intestinal Gas.2. Poem by Nabakishore Dash

Intestinal Gas.2.

Rating: 3.7


Invariably colourless,
Some times odourless,
sometimes pungent and nauseating,
it causes the men in
immediate surrounding
to forcibly close the nasal apertures
to avoid inhaling the smelly odour.
Some times silent,
sometimes resembling the sounds
of the clarinet and a flute,
sometimes like an aeroplane,
sometimes pronged,
sometimes shortened,
are the various characteristics
and their textures.

It often makes offended
in a meeting or in a crowd.
If not judiciously released,
laughter and ridicules are
are the sure outcomes
of this humiliating sound.


Rest in 'Intestinal gas'. 3.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Flatulence sometimes causes ridicules, laughters and humiliating statements.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 12 June 2023

Prolonged, not pronged I line 12 of intestinal Gas 2.Sorry fotypo err

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Nabakishore Dash 12 June 2023

Please read prolonged, not pronged.sorry for typo error.

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A brilliant poem that expresses in detail the causes and effects of excessive flatulence. Very informative write with great images.

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M. Asim Nehal 30 May 2023

Yes sometimes controllable and many a time uncontrollable. You have explained it nicely and boldly, I appreciate the way you put it together in your poems.5*****

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