somewhere in a deep forest
away from the prying eye
there i found a corner
for you and me
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A lovely piece Indira...I agree with everyone's comments..the ending is brilliant
Evocative of escaping into another dimension. Imaginative and delicate.
into another wilderness makes me feel on top of the universe.Very good.
very beautiful love packed wilderness I loved it regards sandhya
'....give our soul the place it rightfully belongs ' Excellent Ending! I wonder if at all I could do justice to my soul even for a moment! A sweet 10.
well, words aren't enough to describe this poem. its wonderful. different, yet so obvious! loved it ma'am. thank you.
'sterile wilderness! ! ! ! ! ' Wow what a fruitful writing.........flowery expression.........u took me to another world........