Intrusion Poem by Pranab K Chakraborty


It was a prohibited zone
I was the trespasser

when I came to their notice
offered me two options
living or loving

three seconds to decide
I thought myself for fraction of second
it was a thoughtless zone
they threw me tied
with improper asking

just opened my mouth
uttered with hurry pronounce
loving living
is my choice

they shoot immediate
not to me
but the board they put
with rubbish instruction!

Wednesday, September 10, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
Gajanan Mishra 10 September 2014

loving living of my choice, good writing, thanks,

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Rajnish Manga 17 November 2014

The initial lines are captivating. I enjoyed reading the poem. Thanks.

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Soul Watcher 29 October 2014

Nice and so much fun to read......enjoyed this very much.... please read my poems and leave your opinion

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Ken E Hall 22 September 2014

Pity the world don't choose loving and living poem is very reverent in today's wars..great poem...regards

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Lyn Paul 13 September 2014

A great title with your thoughtful words as we have changed so much beauty. Loving living is my choice too. Thank you

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Antonio Liao 10 September 2014

so delightful and painful to the world; of what has the humanity done to the mother earth.... Deceitful act of pain a 10/10 and a Star

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