~ Is The Way Of Life ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
17 July 17,2010
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Note: Exactly one year ago I first posted my poetry in PH [Checkmate]
Today [17 July 17,2010] to commemorate my humble offering ~ niv]
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Delete relit replete and complete ~ Is the way of life
Scan LAN ban can ~ Is the way of life
Junk funk drunk with pinch of crank ~ Is the way of life.
Excellent Poets
And poetries too
Isn’t that
Hey readers what you say?
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Glossary: Humbly given for what I tried to express
[1] Can: Can or tin [used as verb]
[2] Funk: An earthy type of jazz combining it with blues and soul; has a heavy bass line that accentuates the first beat in the bar
[3] Crank: An amphetamine derivative used as a stimulant to the nervous system
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Life always has two diametrically opposite dimensions or two extreme peaks of a wave (analogy sound wave or alternating current wave) as called “Crest” and “Trough”.I must say a life gets complete with deplete and replete.Nicely incorporated various facets of life appearing cocurrently and countercurrently.Poetry certainly adds to completeness in a poet’s life. After a day’s office work if I read a book or even watch TV, I doze off but when sit before PH I get refreshed. Your poem is also a stimulant for me to do away with my weariness. Excellent, ten by ten.
Congrags the completion and the review of the followed ways, go ahead and find out the different ways 10+
The poem, very tiny, is hiden beneath the folds of glossaries. Getting there needs effort, and once there, it is worth a 10.
you write as words come to you. your words are free and not restricted. absolutely love <3
you write and rhyme real well... it seems as if you don't have to think it through as much of how life is with you... God bless you.
What a great write. Such a play with words. I am amazed how well yu play with the readers senses. Still thinking about it :)
Indeed a post modern poem with all the flamboyancy of fevering youth and very well coinage of words and deployment in picturesque fashion …classy…fine cut and polished 10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I loved the way you expressed this Nicely written: -)