Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 106,181 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

It's A Poem On You - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

When silky words slip from your eyes,
to deep very deep inner of your heart.
When lines rearrange their shape and color,
and start resembling your curved eye brows.
When passion of the poem increases heart beats,
and beats start sending musical waves,
to your cold still lips
and awake the sleeping beauty curvatures.
When curvatures start vibrating
and move the inner plates of your body,
you say hello to the fault belts,
and welcome the delayed earthquake.
When you desire the shocks to be more intense,
and wish it could activate the dormant volcano.
Rest assure it's a poem on you!

Topic(s) of this poem: poem


Comments about It's A Poem On You by Akhtar Jawad

  • Hazel Durham (11/24/2015 4:18:00 PM)


    A fascinating write with stunning imagery and is so original! (Report) Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (11/24/2015 9:26:00 AM)


    Many ways to interpret this. I liked the first line where words escape from eyes. Nicely written (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/24/2015 7:51:00 AM)


    Amusing....You have mentioned the small and big signs of poem on beloved.....I liked it.....How about friends and poets? (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/24/2015 7:26:00 AM)


    Very deep and inner emotion flows in this marvelous work that talks about beat of heart in vision of eyes and beauty and this activate the dormant volcano. Amazing imagery is drawn here with nice presentation. Excellent...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 24, 2015



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