It's Better Poem by Neela Nath Das

It's Better

Rating: 5.0


It's better to stay
out of sight.
It's better
to stop all fight.
It's better
to be good friend.
It's better
to see the end.
It's better,
to water our kindness.
It's better,
to lose the race.
It's better,
to hide your rage.
It's better,
to open new page.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 May 2013

Nice poem let us open a page to remove the pangs of humanity

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Kanav Justa 25 May 2013

says a lot, , this poem of yours, , nicely done

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Unwritten Soul 25 May 2013

Start new page, writing new beautiful flow in colorful glow! ! start new and it's better_Soul

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R.j. Wynn 25 May 2013

Amen brother Hari, don't worry, be happy.

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Valerie Dohren 25 May 2013

Wise words Hari - nice write. Have you read mine 'Better to, Rather than.....'

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Heather Wilkins 26 June 2013

Its better to be silent it's better to open a new page. true.

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Vishal Sharma 11 June 2013

great piece of work indeed your poems have different charming nice

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David Wood 07 June 2013

Every new day is an unwritten page just waiting.

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Farah Ilyas 03 June 2013

Whole poem is beautifully written but It's better to stay out of sight, , sounds a bit pessimistic view....hope you will be all right, if something hurts u. let it go, don't take it too serious...be happy...awesome poem

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Farah Ilyas 03 June 2013

Whole poem is beautifully written but It's better to stay out of sight, , sounds a bit pessimistic view....hope you will be all right, if something hurts u. let it go, don't take it too serious...be happy...awesome poem

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