.jealousy Poem by Vidyadhar Durgekar

.jealousy

Rating: 4.6


Jealousy haunts golden lily,
Watching the riverside lady,
Angelic ebullient eyes unwary
Of the orchids stare and envy;

Rose no match for pink lips,
Nor it’s dangling stocks,
Nearest to her comely hips,
Nor the swaying buttocks;

Lotus feels quail and nervous,
Whenever lady is amorous,
As her cheek turns rosy pink,
Making lotus flinch and shrink

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vanessa Svaleson 14 June 2008

it is great i like everything sways

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Melvina Germain 13 June 2008

Your heart portrays such beauty, elegant words speak in such a sweet tone.

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Prasetya Utama 13 June 2008

nice metaphora and beautiful picture of your heart!

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Nice poem. Enjoyed. Thanks.

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Dereck Gibbs 12 June 2008

the imagery in this poem is truly amazing. and the flow is great too. a wonderful piece

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Reshma Ramesh 01 October 2008

lol! ! very nice........

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Anjali Sinha 11 July 2008

nice poem. metamorphic and picturesque--complete with lily, orchid, rose and lotus. 10 points to you

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Mamta Agarwal 27 June 2008

lovely, great metaphor 10for this picturesque piece of writing,

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Moushumi moushumi 16 June 2008

we could continue on & on. But that's the stop point to be mesmerised by this poem where it stops. A great metaphor still haunts me without any word to say...pl keep on sharing such poems for me.

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Neha Aradhye 15 June 2008

ekdam sahi... :) :) :)

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