Jesus Mantra Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Jesus Mantra

Rating: 4.6


When I forget to breathe my Jesus mantra,
When the sweet scent of fragrant incense fades,
When the flame from votive candles is quenched;
Everything in my world goes wrong,
I play dissonant notes
To the most unhappy songs,
I walk out into the moonlight and it fails to shimmer
In a lovely woman’s hair,
I grow tired and sad with a heart of despair.

Saturday, October 7, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: despair,hair,sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Ori 08 October 2006

There's alot to be said about 'connection' to Source. It keeps us anchored and balanced. You say alot here, Uriah - and quite powerfully. Linda

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 08 October 2006

AHHH! I SEE SUS'S COMMENT...CAT STEVENS FAN ARE YA NOW? WE MUST TALK....NICE PIECE HERE, ALMOST GOOD ENOUGH TO HAVE 'TEA FOR THE TILLERMAN''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Sandra Fowler 07 October 2006

Very fine and genuine feelings expressed in this nostalgic poem. Take care, Uriah. Sandra

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Goldy Locks 07 October 2006

disenchanting, U. longer boats are coming to win us, theyre comin' to win us. hold on to the shore...'' ~Stevens. but the soul of nobody knows how a flower grows. '' take care, Sus.

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