Jewel Poem by Rini Shibu

Jewel

Rating: 5.0


So shiny and bright
Emitting sparkling light
But you don't see her cry
When she is burning in the fire
Forgetting all the pain
As beautifully chiseled and stained
The smile on your face
She wished while opening the case

Wednesday, January 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: gold
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 23 January 2019

Jewel is very shiny ad very bright. You have beautifully captured the shining effect of gold with imagery of this wonderful poem....10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 January 2019

YOU yourself Rini are a smiling jewel so you can assess real ones smile a while good poetess

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Lamar Cole 23 January 2019

This is a very good and a very heartfelt poem about jewel.

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M Asim Nehal 23 January 2019

Superb! ! ! ! 24 Carat Gold The smile on your face She wished while opening the case

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Kostas Lagos 23 January 2019

Masterfully written Rini! Excellent

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Prabir Gayen 23 January 2019

Fine poem dear poetess...you are a promising career

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