Journeyman Poem by Susan Lacovara

Journeyman

Rating: 5.0


Stay far from me today
I am not strong enough to resist
falling back into your eyes
The whirlpool of crystal blue
That beckons my surrender

Go where you will
without me tagging along
Let me lag behind in the sadness
of your quick steps
Farther from my side

Watching from a place of barren trees
You seem to walk in circles
Circling the mistakes and misunderstandings
Waiting for the walking green
It is not too late to stop and ask directions

Wednesday, December 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
) 12/04/19)for those who wander in search of changing the past...
a long and endless road.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Clinton Siegle 08 April 2020

thanks for sharing. are you mandela effected? the past can not be changed.. the reality is only the response to the past can be viewed differently

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C F 11 December 2019

Such a beautiful write, still hoping against hope for renewed encounter despite the pain of separation.10+

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Anthony S.Burkett 04 December 2019

" Can you give me directions? " ... " To where? " , you may ask... " To your heart." , would be my reply... Such a lovely poem...

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 December 2019

Sad poem but expressed beautifully. With its amazing flow it makes great reading. Full marks from me.

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