# Joy Of The Whole Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

I have always hating competing. Maybe this is the reason why? Profound honesty.

Profound philosophy my friend. Well done!

‘…the joy of this whole // is embedded within // each of our souls…’ Most reflective part to me … Universal Us [a poem of me] … the choicest focus 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

TRUE! OUR SOUL REMAINS ONLY AS A PART OF THE UNIVERSAL SOUL, AND ONE DAY MUST UNITE TO BECOME A COMPLETE WHOLE! This has been the message of Hindu philosophy also! Plato's ideal 'Form' - was called by Neo-platonists as the 'Good' or the 'ONE'! St. Augustine baptised Plato's pagan philosophy and called that 'Good' = GOD! Ever since the the Medieval philosopher spent their life-time proving the existence of God with Logic & faith! FOR YOUR POEM 10! (Kindly read my 'An Introduction to Medieval philosophy' on page 2) Thanks, - Raj

the joy of this whole is embedded within each of our souls excellent abstract poem, thank you for sharing.

So far the rating is there racing also will be there...truth is...only time and years alone will decide the standard of work..I've already commented at the other poem of your request...and thanks for your suggestion on the specified .com...I'll go through it in comming days....thanks a lot SL

A very good poem. Sometimes competition is good and can make it complete. Too much pushing can do harm. Good write. Your friend Lynn

Well stated poem Sam! This poem speaks to a mortal condition about one human failure-the 'joy of the whole' instead a single person being part and partial of the whole.A solid 10

Excellent! my friend, let me remind all of us, that 'WISDOM is not a priviledge but gift given to us by our creator to be share with the world', keep it up,10++++

i haven't noticed competition anywhere here...have noticed greed only...every fore-runner would have a sweating limit you know!