folks...
stop this compete
it never makes us complete
who can out do the other
when we are all stringed together
like the drops in a wave....
our identity
is so wholesome
let us not make it so tiny
post and position
gains at our disposition
not at the cost of our whole
the joy of this whole
is embedded within
each of our souls
tiny we may seem
the success of our tiny selves
is not at all our highest esteem
we are born to enjoy
the joy of the whole
so...
folks....
stop this compete
it will never make us complete
I see myself so inferior to you already sir. And u win without competing. very fine poem sir. You are fit to be a philosopher enlightening us with the most common of truths and fats ignored everyday. Sree sree was a oet in A.P he led a revolution to goodwill influencing the youth. You must do your toil in Tamil Nadu. Sree Sree's simplicity yet complexity awed everyone, u have this thing in u sir go global sir.
The whole business world is surviving on cut throat competition. A sound advice is given in the poem not to compete, but enjoy the joy of the whole. Nice.
all of our lives we compete, from childhood school days to the workforce and it becomes automatic, but your heart becomes stale and stagnant to all that you see, it is time to let our hearts roam free. beautiful write sam! thanks for sharing
the joy of this whole is embedded within each of our souls excellent abstract poem, thank you for sharing.
So far the rating is there racing also will be there...truth is...only time and years alone will decide the standard of work..I've already commented at the other poem of your request...and thanks for your suggestion on the specified .com...I'll go through it in comming days....thanks a lot SL
A very good poem. Sometimes competition is good and can make it complete. Too much pushing can do harm. Good write. Your friend Lynn
Well stated poem Sam! This poem speaks to a mortal condition about one human failure-the 'joy of the whole' instead a single person being part and partial of the whole.A solid 10
Excellent! my friend, let me remind all of us, that 'WISDOM is not a priviledge but gift given to us by our creator to be share with the world', keep it up,10++++
i haven't noticed competition anywhere here...have noticed greed only...every fore-runner would have a sweating limit you know!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A glorious theme well penned. We are already whole in our being and self but vainly search it outside in this material world. This is petty human nature.