Just Ease Poem by lady grace

Just Ease

Rating: 5.0


he hears when you call
from the first morning light
he hears your voice
a hero from victorious fight...

in a battle where knights come with swords
you're among of those who comes late
yours is not to fight but to write
the unending claims of historical rights...

a man in black sat on his chair
to balance the figure of both the arm and the chair
who are you to judge? ...who wants to dare?
both were given a chance to be fair..

let justice be a friend

let it live in your heart

let no subordinates be faked

for their superior's sake..

Monday, June 29, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: hero,justice,rights
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 01 July 2009

The famous lady grace.. Hmmmmm.......good write lady I wonder who taught you to write Good job...Gracy Dont forget 2 pray

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Paige S 30 June 2009

I like how this poem doesn't just sound like words on a page, but actual thoughts. Very well written!

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Your poem tells a story well and the last four lines spaced out as they are make the poem. Well done! 10 Karin Anderson

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Jason Mcgookin 29 June 2009

liked the story behind it well written

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Carl Harris 29 June 2009

An interesting and well written poem, Lady Grace. I enjoyed reading it. Carl.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2009

let justice be a friend let it live in your heart let no subordinates be faked for their superior's sake..............let there be no discrimiationfor their worthshow on the field......very good narration inthr for m of tale.....10 rad mine disparity

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Lily Law 13 July 2009

a poem that tells story... nice work! ! ! =]

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Duh Huh 13 July 2009

I like how you started the story with a historical feel and brought it to the present with skill full creativity. Thank you for sharing :)

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Ron Flowers 04 July 2009

A very good poem. Ron

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I really enjoyed the story behind it and i love the way you write. It's simple yet powerful. Im still trying to write that way. Anyways, this poem rocks, i mean it was really great! ~Izzzzzy~

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