oh heaven above
forgive this man who takes me down
he doesn't feel the pain inside
nor to see the aching heart...
oh prince of hell
bless this man of attitude
give him the blessed shield
protect him from flaming curse...
oh lord of Olympus
send the most poisonous tongue of earth
dropp the biggest rocks of hatred
to all terrors walking by night..
beauty of the sky fades away
from the unseen things below
men as the source of destructions
will be judged and to the hell will go...
i am an angel of death
who will judge greedy people
who will suppress earthly moves
of hearts made of thorns..
when there be a fair judgement?
where will be the next place to live?
what will happen to planet earth?
who are to be judged and to be killed? ...
neither he, nor she
could justify perfectly
no one will come, nothing would be
there will be nobody next to me...
Dear, may we take a project to 'suppress earthly moves of the hearts made of thorns..'. You have a transcended heart (not only tortured mind) . Won't you turn your emotion to power to heal both the people tortures and are tortured?
Grace , beauitful thoughts , nice writes . Hats of to you , for having such a wonderful creation .
Love it! ! never thought about using a theme like this one...but will from now on, thanks Mark
After our death what will happen to planet earth? It doesn't matter to anyone who is dead. One day this planet will dissolve with the universe. Another cycle would begin. A good poem.
My apologies for the looong delay, health problems of decrepitude. Will not comment on poem but you are not doing justice to your work by the flat monotone which detracts from otherwise fine work. Tom Golding
Intense poem…swing and de-swing… Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
A poem both intense and meaningful, rich imagery and clear message, you have narrated so many different things in a beautiful way, very nice write!
how nice to read a curse from an angle...... sometimes also love and affection on us....please donot curse us.......... very beautiful.......... to differenct topic....
All I can say is this is a great poem. I lose myself in your imagery and it makes this poem so believalbe.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
ssshhhhh, ok..this is what i have observed..too much anger is inside the heart of the author..wait, , dont get mad..ssshhhhhh nice coz you make urself lose from your past..i could feel the hatred, anger in ur heart...but be strong sweetheart...be strong...naizz