Just You.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Just You....

Rating: 5.0


As we met
during sweet full moon

on the beach, at the seaside,
all too soon

my life changed with all tides

fascinated at once by my appearance

just you

being not aware
of the great difference
in our sweet young years,

our smart young love changed

this change, so soon, really insane

just concerning you

our pink coloured view blurred

our God turned into a demon,
it really hurt
wished that love returned,

that moment on
had to walk with you,
just on and on
just with you

it was true magical love, sweet love

at first and at last sight

from day dawn
till the eternal moonlit night
oh what a power,
what a might

might be wrong, might be right

all about you
just you

life and love
mingled so strong
you knew what went wrong

I only knew I had to be strong
my whole life long
just for you

you I adored, never bored,
our love still meant for it

as we met
during sweet full moon
at the beach, at the seaside,

my life changed with all the tide

our love like crazy
our life most happy

all about you

our love most divine
two genial hearts and one soul
who else could make me whole

you just you

my heart most fine, listening to you
my soul most faithful, adoring you
my rational being,
all loving you
my existence: all my life,
all my love
all true,
all genuine, all transparent

all about just you....and me
never restrained,
though our life had changed,

but that one remained
that which was true passion,
and true love,

really too insane….


Pipi
WA Earthly Notes
for My Beloved,
the Only True One.

Sylvia Frances Chan
All Rights Reserved
14 August 2019 at 22.05 ECTime.

Wednesday, August 14, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
though our life had changed...........

but that one remained
that which was true passion,
and true love,

really too insane............


Earthly Notes
for My Beloved,
the Only True One.

Sylvia Frances Chan
All Rights Reserved
14 August 2019 at 22.05 European Community Time.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Campion 14 August 2019

A sweet love is expressed so well.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 August 2019

just me yes only one question why I am liked am so popular worldwide as poet poet but not many PH members like me coz I am too blunt do tell me poetess sfc

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Rebecca Navarre 11 June 2022

Thank you for sharing such intimate personal part of life, so beautifully woven into time! .. Beautiful beyond #ing! ..+++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 11 June 2022

Oh, How beautifully heart moving! .. And beautifully breathtaking! .. Filled with such passion and depth of heart! ..

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Valsa George 16 August 2019

'our love most divine two genial hearts and one soul who else could make me whole' A beautiful poem on love! So heartwarming and passionate! True love can never die! I discern the sense of longing for those beautiful moments when you met him by the beach side and when your life changed all of a sudden....! A loving presence can radically change our lives. Sad that this love couldn't fruition.... but it still stays. A very evocative write! A 10

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Thank you so much for your very insightful response, God's Blessings for you in abundance.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 August 2019

A wonderful poem of love. So tenderly expressed. It captures how true love can change us and our disposition in life. Very heartwarming write. All lines speak of the wonderful feelings.of having a.true and eternal.love. Beautifully crafted and well executed.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 August 2019

The sweet full moon day is very memorable because this day has carried sweet love and fragrance of sweet blooming. With crazy and happy mood loving existence is felt very well. Great perception is excellently expressed in this beautiful poem....10

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