Kash Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Kash

Rating: 5.0

Kash wuh chehra mujhe itna na bhaya hota,
Kash khabon mein mere koi na aaya hota.
Husn ne sar pase mahmil na ghumaya hota,
Ishq ne sar sare maqtal na uthaya hota.
Zindigi itni bhi dushwar na hoti shayed,
Kash yun aapne mujhko na bhulaya hota.
Jane keyun aapke is gham ko jaga kar rakha,
Thapkian deke ise main ne sulaya hota.
Ab yehi fikr hay kis tarah bachaoon isko,
Zindigi tujhko na raste se uthaya hota.
Maut kitni hay asan yeh majnoon se pooch,
Kash yeh dhang mujhe usne sikhaya hota.
Gar bicharna hi tha mujhse to mile keyun Akhtar,
Tumko khona tha agar, tumko na paya hota.

Monday, October 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 12 October 2015

Thanks for sharing such a wonderful Ghazal. Its sweet rhyming and freshness of expression makes it a real treat to a lover of the genre. I would like to quote: Ab yehi fikr hay kis tarah bachaoon isko, Zindigi tujhko na raste se uthaya hota.

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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 22 August 2016

bahut hi sundar gajal 10++

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Amitava Sur 17 October 2015

khub sundar ei prosno aar atmo kotha.... very perfect analysis.... Gar bicharna hi tha mujhse to mile keyun Akhtar, Tumko khona tha agar, tumko na paya hota. ............................ 10,10,10,10,10

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 16 October 2015

Verily, meeting and departing are the modes of life some are temporarily and some permanently but they leave an everlasting mark and become a memoir....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2015

Beautiful Ghazal so nicely composed. Well expressive. Thanks for sharing. , .....10

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M Asim Nehal 12 October 2015

Bahut khoob likha aapne Janab..Laga mera hal-e-dil khol kar likh diya....Kash...... Maut kitni hay aasaan yeh majnu se pooch, Kash yeh dhang mujhe usne sikhaya hota. Gar bicharna hi tha mujhse to mile keyun Akhtar, Tumko khona tha agar, tumko na paya hota.

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