Kavita-Konarka(A Poem In Odia Language) Poem by Bharati Nayak

Kavita-Konarka(A Poem In Odia Language)

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Mo charipate
gahala chahala
Loka haujau
samaste kahanti
mu bharapur manisa te
kichhi abhaba nathiba
mora samsara ! !

mu kintu ekala thae
nija bhitare
mo adhagadha swapna mane
mote autu pautu karanti
bhoka sosa re padirahithanti
ghara konare
adha lekha kabitara pharda sabu !


mu bhabi heuthae
bhagna shila sabu jodi dei
gadhi debi swapna ra imarat te

naheu pachhe konarka aba tajmahal
pathachala klanti shranti paain
bani jaau sheetala padapa tie .

Sunday, June 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,writing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 27 June 2017

Khub sundara bhabapurna kabita tie. Chamatkara lekha shaili. Kichhi apananka kabita dhadi jaha atyanta hrudayasparshi ethare abatrana karajaipare...Poet's PagePoemsCommentsStatsE-BooksBiographySend MessageShare on FacebookShare on Twitter Poems by Bharati Nayak: 60 / 126 « prev. poem next poem » Kavita-Konarka(A Poem In Odia Language) - Poem by Bharati Nayak Mo charipate gahala chahala Loka haujau samaste kahanti mu bharapur manisa te kichhi abhaba nathiba mora samsara! ! mu kintu ekala thae nija bhitare mo adhagadha swapna mane mote autu pautu karanti bhoka sosa re padirahithanti ghara konare adha lekha kabitara pharda sabu! mu bhabi heuthae bhagna shila sabu jodi dei gadhi debi swapna ra imarat te naheu pachhe konarka aba tajmahal pathachala klanti shranti paain bani jaau sheetala padapa tie. Beautiful poem, thanks for sharing...10

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Bharati Nayak 27 June 2017

Thank you very much for your kind words of inspiration.. apananka sundara mantabya paain mu aapananku mo hrudayara krutagyanta janauchhi. aapana nijara chamatkar kavita tatha ucha kotira bislesana madhyamare odisha paain garba o gouraba anichhanti .

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 June 2017

Khub sundara bhabapurna kabita tie. Chamatkara lekha shaili. Kichhi apananka kabita dhadi jaha atyanta hrudayasparshi ethare abatarana karajaipare...mu bhabi heuthae bhagna shila sabu jodi dei gadhi debi swapna ra imarat te naheu pachhe konarka aba tajmahal pathachala klanti shranti paain bani jaau sheetala padapa tie. Beautiful poem, thanks for sharing...10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 October 2021

You have composed it so beautifully dear poetess Bharati. I liked the way it is penned.....5 stars.

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 06 September 2018

Nice poem............

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 15 December 2017

mo adhagadha swapna mane mote autu pautu karanti bhoka sosa re padirahithanti ghara madam I really enjoy your poem thanks for sharing 10++++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 November 2017

What a wonderful imagination! The incisive thinking faculty of giving a divine shape to pieces of stones through majestic art is utterly fascinating! The scintillating poetic expression is highly admirable…..” mu bhabi heuthae /bhagna shila sabu jodi dei/gadhi debi swapna ra imarat te” A great write.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2017

ପଢି ସୁନ୍ଦର କବିତା ଆପଣଙ୍କ ଏହି କୋଣାର୍କ ବିଷୟରେ, ଜାଣିଲୁ ଅନେକ କଥା କବିତାରେ, ଗଢି ସପନର ଏ ସାଥେ ବାସ୍ତବତା, ଏହି କବିତା କହେ ଏଠି ଅନେକ ମହାନ କଥା... ହୋଇଛି କବିତା ଟି ସତେ ସତେ ମନଲୋଭା, ପଢିବାକୁ ଆଉଥରେ ଆମେ ଭ୍ରମଣରେ ଉଭା....

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Bharati Nayak 03 July 2017

Mo kavita apananka manaku chhuin parithibaru mu nijaku dhanya manekaruchhi.. apananka prerana mote adhikaru adhika kavita lekhibaku utsahita karuchhi .

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