Keep The Torch Burning! Poem by Savita Tyagi

Keep The Torch Burning!

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Ideals are like shiny peaks
Of snowy mountains.
Mankind wishes to climb it,
Touch it, make it its own;
But more than often it licks failure
Than success.

Still you have to keep
The torch of hope and faith burning,
To pass it on to next generation.
This is one responsibility,
No one should think of ducking.

In the long march of time,
Someone of extra ordinary stature
Appears to touch those heights,
To fulfill the aspirations of mankind.

Wednesday, August 14, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: ideals
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Campion 14 August 2019

An inspirational poem everyone should read and applaud. Thank you for your kind comments.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 August 2019

long abstention from composition and non commenting and not thanking must not be avoided by gooder poets Ma'am

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Ideals are like shiny peaks Mankind wishes to climb it, keepThe torch of hope and faith burning, To fulfill the aspirations of mankind.. Wonderful thought. Thank you Savitaji.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 August 2019

Ideals are like shiny peaks Of snowy mountains. Mankind wishes to climb it, ... I liked this analogy

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 August 2019

You have greatly expressed your great perception with a great vision. We have to keep torch of hope and faith burning so that we can climb the mountain of success. We can touch the peak point. You are very right. Mankind wishes to climb a shiny mountain and Ideals are like shiny peaks. Great ideology always motivates mankind. An outstanding poem is beautifully penned with metaphor. I hope this will be chosen as the poem of the day one day....10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 August 2019

A powerful and beautiful poem of hope and perseverance. Very inspiring. " Ideals are like shiny peaks Of snowy mountains. " Wonderful line from a great poem.

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