Keep This Desire On.... Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Keep This Desire On....

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Desire is like a river, it flows on...
Desire is like a mountain, it stays on.....
Desire is like a rainbow... It flashes on…
Desire is like a flower... It blossoms on...

The heart has a desire to live on…..
The eye has a desire to meet with…
Love has a desire to spread on…..
Desire has a desire to burn on…..

A desire in you is driving you
And a desire in me is driving me…
Keep this desire ON….

Friday, February 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: descriptive,desire,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 05 February 2016

There are times when a desire is unachievable, even harmful, and has to be suppressed.

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Valsa George 07 February 2016

Yes, this desire is the drive to living! If there is no desire, life will be so bland! But too much desire, as Buddha says is the root cause of all our suffering! A well thought out poem!

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M Asim Nehal 07 February 2016

Thanks much Madam.

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Unwritten Soul 07 February 2016

Th flow of your poem is so smooth, i know your secret...you kep the desire on..... beautiful write Asim Nehal. :)

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M Asim Nehal 07 February 2016

Thanks much US...

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 February 2016

The desire of the truth and the desire of love. Thanks for sharing.

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Souren Mondal 06 February 2016

This desire is what life is all about. We must not fail to keep it burning as you said here. Thank you for this Life-affirming, positive poem Asim.

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M Asim Nehal 07 February 2016

Thanks Souren.

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Nosheen Irfan 06 February 2016

Wow. That's such a lovely read. So simple, yet so powerful. It has a wonderful impact on the reader. Full marks.

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M Asim Nehal 07 February 2016

Thanks Nosheenji

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