Neela Nath Das


Kept Me Alive - Poem by Neela Nath Das

I was about to die.
I could not breathe easily.
He supplied words of oxygen
And kept me alive.
He has greens around
And open sky above the hill.
I started loving life
Because he has kept me alive.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life


Comments about Kept Me Alive by Neela Nath Das

  • Alice Perfect (8/14/2015 8:16:00 PM)


    at time magical souls do cross our path

    that we may have the eyes to see them

    or at least the ears to hear them


    Write for us dear kind Sister Neela! ! ! !
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    Neela Nath Das Neela Nath Das (8/16/2015 12:08:00 AM)

    So sweet comment! Thanks bro.

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  • Amitava Sur (6/15/2015 9:51:00 PM)


    Very good to listen that with those words of oxygen you find life in it. Unfortunately some of us with the given pain and strife, do not find that even! ! ! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rajesh Thankappan (4/16/2015 10:44:00 AM)


    Sometimes a simple word of love can provide us succor. A lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (4/3/2015 8:05:00 PM)


    Thank you, Neela, for sharing your lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (4/3/2015 10:24:00 AM)


    Yes there are so much in life.There are words of oxygen, there are greens around and open sky.God has sent us to this world to live life fully.Your poem is short and beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Alice Perfect (4/2/2015 10:38:00 PM)


    life is worth living
    again and again
    we all get it right
    write? right?
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/2/2015 9:54:00 PM)


    Nice presentation in few lines. A lovely poem. I like best the lines He supplied words of oxygen
    And kept me alive. Many thanks.
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  • Akhtar Jawad (3/31/2015 11:17:00 PM)


    Listening to words of life, can perform many miracles. A wonderful poem! ..................10 (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (3/28/2015 1:03:00 AM)


    He supplied words of oxygen
    And kept me alive.
    A good way of expression.
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  • Lyn Paul (3/25/2015 4:55:00 PM)


    Those incredible words of oxygen. The want to live.
    For we must want. x
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 25, 2015



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