Lady Luck... Poem by Shaun Cronick

Lady Luck...

Rating: 5.0


Gambled my last silver dollar's,
On the spinning of this wheel.
Will I now win or lose,
Only Lady Luck can soon reveal...

I bet my wages on that horse,
Leading the others a merry dance.
Will I now win or lose,
Only Lady Luck gives me a chance...

I'm betting all on a poker game,
With one last turn of the card.
Will I now win or lose,
Only Lady Luck now of me regard...

A simple heads or tails,
That's what my life's become.
Unpaid debts with these gangsters,
Flipping a coin for their fun...

Heads I live and tails I die,
The coin now spinning in the air.
My life hanging in the balance,
Will Lady Luck even choose to care...

Friday, October 16, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: gambling,life and death,luck
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 17 October 2020

A simple heads or tails, That's what my life's become. Unpaid debts with these gangsters, Flipping a coin for their fun...

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Dominic Windram 17 October 2020

The trials of many a gambler are wonderfully encapusulated in this dramatic monologue Shaun. I like the way it ends...creates real suspense..will he win or lose? It's a 'wish gambling was fun, but inevitably it's not' inspired five from me!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 October 2020

A wonderful poem with a great message. Engaging in a game of chance is always a disadvantage. We will just end up at the losing end. Beautifully crafted and well executed write. Top Marks and to my Poem List.

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