Land Of Rainbows Poem by jibin joseph

Land Of Rainbows

Rating: 5.0

My love hold my hand
Hold my hand tight
While we take a walk
A walk on the rainbows

And when we reach the summit
Lets slide down to the horizon
You slide on green
Me on blue
Lets shout with glee
All the way down

Don’t you ever leave my hands?
When we reach the other side
Cos I know no one there
On the other end

In fact there is no one there
Only you and me
Lets get lost in each other
And no one around
In the land of rainbows

Preeti - is here! 02 February 2007

Land of rainbows, wow, I must visit it soon if its goin got be that romantic. Very well weaved poem! Preets

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Sandra Fowler 01 February 2007

What an enchanted place the land of Rainbows must be. Very charming, Jibin. Kind regards, Sandra

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Ernestine Northover 26 January 2007

What can I say, but beautiful. I shall read some more of your work in due course. I have enjoyed it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Jim Foulk 26 January 2007

a wonderful piece of poetry, well done

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Raghavan Warrier 24 January 2007

Excellent imagery. A mixture of childish innocence and adventure of lovers. Excellent imagination

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jibin joseph

jibin joseph

cochin, kerala state, india
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