jibin joseph

Rookie - 30 Points (05 dec 1980 / cochin, kerala state, india)

Addressed To Your Heart..... - Poem by jibin joseph

Sending you my heart
In a package of love
Covered with sweet dreams
Stamped with trust
Sealed with care
Yellow ribbon of hugs
Tied up with a smile
Knot made of a kiss
Addressed to your heart


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  • Rajaram Ramachandran (2/4/2007 7:34:00 PM)

    A wonderful heart to heart presentation from JJ (Report)Reply

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  • (2/4/2007 11:59:00 AM)

    You have expressed the love you feel. It flows from your soul and I can feel it. Wonderful verse. Best wishes suzan (Report)Reply

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  • (1/31/2007 4:52:00 AM)

    Jibin, I can see why this poem is in the top five hundred. This is an amazing tidbit of warm tidings. It's very sweet, and the flow is wonderful. For some reason, I keep imagining a box of chocolates - then the more I think about it, the more I can see little heart shaped pieces in this container held fast with ribbon and bow. The sweet delight inside, is you. Wonderful.

    -L.C.
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  • (1/31/2007 4:23:00 AM)

    Jibin,

    who wouldn't like a letter like this?
    beautiful/sweet/cute!

    Preeti
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  • Ernestine Northover (1/26/2007 3:54:00 PM)

    Utterly delightful. An excellent flow throughout the poem, and it was rather like losing oneself in a fabulously delicious creamy confection. I can taste it just reading this one. Applause! ! ! ! !
    Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
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  • (1/26/2007 12:28:00 PM)

    Very cute. lol. It works on the women because it made me smile! Good job, Joseph. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/26/2007 10:32:00 AM)

    Emotionallly over rated.....like eating huge amount of choclotes...... (Report)Reply

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  • (1/26/2007 10:27:00 AM)

    This is an excellent write. The choice of metaphor and its handling reveals a masterly touch. All aspects of love is included in such a few words. Beautiful poem. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/26/2007 8:15:00 AM)

    a lovely poem, Jibin...
    i like the choice of the metaphor here and its well-sustained...
    the poem is succinctly eloquent!

    best wishes...
    Asma...
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  • (1/26/2007 3:34:00 AM)

    Wonderful. Expressed so much of love in a few lines. Write more. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/26/2007 2:23:00 AM)

    a very beautiful and different poem with all the love filled in that....with very few words you can express a lot...well done (Report)Reply

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  • (1/25/2007 2:52:00 PM)

    Jibin, did we all get invited to the party here? A lovely little poem, most sweet and loving. HG: -) x (Report)Reply

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  • (1/25/2007 12:59:00 PM)

    Very swett and nicely worded, Jibin. Whether the parcel metaphor would be better served by 'wrapped in' rather than 'covered with' I leave to you. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/25/2007 12:20:00 PM)

    Thank you for asking me to read this write, Like Sandra ten was no problem, I keep it in my favorite, I may use on feb 14 to send it as a e-poem card, Very well writtin jibin, It gave me some nice fellings of love and their similies. :) (Report)Reply

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  • (1/25/2007 12:06:00 PM)

    What a charming poem, Jibin. A perfect valentine. Ten without hesitation.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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  • (1/25/2007 12:05:00 PM)

    A nicely chosen metaphor that makes for a neatly crafted little poem. Someone ought to love to receive it :) (Report)Reply

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  • (1/25/2007 11:50:00 AM)

    This is very romantic and very organised at the same time. It hits the spot exactly Jibin. Good quality writing. All the bases covered very precisely. jim (Report)Reply

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  • (1/25/2007 11:50:00 AM)

    Joseph, thanks for letting me know - this is a very sweet poem, well done. Esther : ] (Report)Reply

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  • (1/25/2007 11:47:00 AM)

    Excellent poem Jibin.......enjoyed very much! ...............All the best, Diane (Report)Reply

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  • (1/25/2007 11:46:00 AM)

    Wow...that is a fabulous poem...I love it, good job keeping writing poems like this (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 25, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 4, 2011


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