jibin joseph

jibin joseph (05 dec 1980 / cochin, kerala state, india)

Poems by jibin joseph : 2 / 58

Addressed To Your Heart..... - Poem by jibin joseph

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Sending you my heart
In a package of love
Covered with sweet dreams
Stamped with trust
Sealed with care
Yellow ribbon of hugs
Tied up with a smile
Knot made of a kiss
Addressed to your heart

jibin joseph

Poems by jibin joseph : 2 / 58

Rajaram Ramachandran (2/4/2007 7:34:00 PM)
A wonderful heart to heart presentation from JJ (Report)Reply
Suzan Gumush (2/4/2007 11:59:00 AM)
You have expressed the love you feel. It flows from your soul and I can feel it. Wonderful verse. Best wishes suzan (Report)Reply
Lipstick Casanova (1/31/2007 4:52:00 AM)
Jibin, I can see why this poem is in the top five hundred. This is an amazing tidbit of warm tidings. It's very sweet, and the flow is wonderful. For some reason, I keep imagining a box of chocolates - then the more I think about it, the more I can see little heart shaped pieces in this container held fast with ribbon and bow. The sweet delight inside, is you. Wonderful.

-L.C. (Report)Reply
Preeti - is here! (1/31/2007 4:23:00 AM)
Jibin,

who wouldn't like a letter like this?
beautiful/sweet/cute!

Preeti (Report)Reply
Ernestine Northover (1/26/2007 3:54:00 PM)
Utterly delightful. An excellent flow throughout the poem, and it was rather like losing oneself in a fabulously delicious creamy confection. I can taste it just reading this one. Applause! ! ! ! !
Love and hugs Ernestine XXX (Report)Reply
Sara Crandall (1/26/2007 12:28:00 PM)
Very cute. lol. It works on the women because it made me smile! Good job, Joseph. (Report)Reply
Qais Shah (1/26/2007 10:32:00 AM)
Emotionallly over rated.....like eating huge amount of choclotes...... (Report)Reply
Raghavan Warrier (1/26/2007 10:27:00 AM)
This is an excellent write. The choice of metaphor and its handling reveals a masterly touch. All aspects of love is included in such a few words. Beautiful poem. (Report)Reply
Asma Bahrainwala (1/26/2007 8:15:00 AM)
a lovely poem, Jibin...
i like the choice of the metaphor here and its well-sustained...
the poem is succinctly eloquent!

best wishes...
Asma... (Report)Reply
Mary Das (1/26/2007 3:34:00 AM)
Wonderful. Expressed so much of love in a few lines. Write more. (Report)Reply
Prasanna Kumari (1/26/2007 2:23:00 AM)
a very beautiful and different poem with all the love filled in that....with very few words you can express a lot...well done (Report)Reply
Original Unknown Girl (1/25/2007 2:52:00 PM)
Jibin, did we all get invited to the party here? A lovely little poem, most sweet and loving. HG: -) x (Report)Reply
Michael Shepherd (1/25/2007 12:59:00 PM)
Very swett and nicely worded, Jibin. Whether the parcel metaphor would be better served by 'wrapped in' rather than 'covered with' I leave to you. (Report)Reply
Howard Johnson (1/25/2007 12:20:00 PM)
Thank you for asking me to read this write, Like Sandra ten was no problem, I keep it in my favorite, I may use on feb 14 to send it as a e-poem card, Very well writtin jibin, It gave me some nice fellings of love and their similies. :) (Report)Reply
Sandra Fowler (1/25/2007 12:06:00 PM)
What a charming poem, Jibin. A perfect valentine. Ten without hesitation.

Warm regards,

Sandra (Report)Reply
Peter A. Crowther (1/25/2007 12:05:00 PM)
A nicely chosen metaphor that makes for a neatly crafted little poem. Someone ought to love to receive it :) (Report)Reply
Not a member No 4 (1/25/2007 11:50:00 AM)
This is very romantic and very organised at the same time. It hits the spot exactly Jibin. Good quality writing. All the bases covered very precisely. jim (Report)Reply
Esther Leclerc (1/25/2007 11:50:00 AM)
Joseph, thanks for letting me know - this is a very sweet poem, well done. Esther : ] (Report)Reply
Diane Violet (1/25/2007 11:47:00 AM)
Excellent poem Jibin.......enjoyed very much! ...............All the best, Diane (Report)Reply
Chantel Braatz (1/25/2007 11:46:00 AM)
Wow...that is a fabulous poem...I love it, good job keeping writing poems like this (Report)Reply