Sending you my heart
In a package of love
Covered with sweet dreams
Stamped with trust
Sealed with care
Yellow ribbon of hugs
Tied up with a smile
Knot made of a kiss
Addressed to your heart
Jibin, I can see why this poem is in the top five hundred. This is an amazing tidbit of warm tidings. It's very sweet, and the flow is wonderful. For some reason, I keep imagining a box of chocolates - then the more I think about it, the more I can see little heart shaped pieces in this container held fast with ribbon and bow. The sweet delight inside, is you. Wonderful.
-L.C.
Utterly delightful. An excellent flow throughout the poem, and it was rather like losing oneself in a fabulously delicious creamy confection. I can taste it just reading this one. Applause! ! ! ! !
Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
This is an excellent write. The choice of metaphor and its handling reveals a masterly touch. All aspects of love is included in such a few words. Beautiful poem.
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