Addressed To Your Heart..... Poem by jibin joseph

Addressed To Your Heart.....

Rating: 4.9


Sending you my heart
In a package of love
Covered with sweet dreams
Stamped with trust
Sealed with care
Yellow ribbon of hugs
Tied up with a smile
Knot made of a kiss
Addressed to your heart

Addressed To Your Heart.....
Thursday, January 25, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: trust
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sara Crandall 26 January 2007

Very cute. lol. It works on the women because it made me smile! Good job, Joseph.

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Qais Shah 26 January 2007

Emotionallly over rated.....like eating huge amount of choclotes......

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Raghavan Warrier 26 January 2007

This is an excellent write. The choice of metaphor and its handling reveals a masterly touch. All aspects of love is included in such a few words. Beautiful poem.

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Asma Bahrainwala 26 January 2007

a lovely poem, Jibin... i like the choice of the metaphor here and its well-sustained... the poem is succinctly eloquent! best wishes... Asma...

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Mary Das 26 January 2007

Wonderful. Expressed so much of love in a few lines. Write more.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 04 February 2007

A wonderful heart to heart presentation from JJ

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Suzan Gumush 04 February 2007

You have expressed the love you feel. It flows from your soul and I can feel it. Wonderful verse. Best wishes suzan

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Lipstick Casanova 31 January 2007

Jibin, I can see why this poem is in the top five hundred. This is an amazing tidbit of warm tidings. It's very sweet, and the flow is wonderful. For some reason, I keep imagining a box of chocolates - then the more I think about it, the more I can see little heart shaped pieces in this container held fast with ribbon and bow. The sweet delight inside, is you. Wonderful. -L.C.

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Preeti - is here! 31 January 2007

Jibin, who wouldn't like a letter like this? beautiful/sweet/cute! Preeti

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Ernestine Northover 26 January 2007

Utterly delightful. An excellent flow throughout the poem, and it was rather like losing oneself in a fabulously delicious creamy confection. I can taste it just reading this one. Applause! ! ! ! ! Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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cochin, kerala state, india
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