Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 196,720 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

Leave It For The Starry Eyes - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

When lips vibrate like the strings of a tuned guitar,
and air fails to propagate musical titillating waves,
do not ask the singing heart not to sing any more.

When in love, and when beats become a love song,
let the lips smile in dreaming for a sudden wild kiss,
leave it for the starry eyes to listen to and to adore.

Topic(s) of this poem: kiss


Comments about Leave It For The Starry Eyes by Akhtar Jawad

  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (8/31/2019 12:14:00 PM)

    Wonderful imaginary and imagery. A hunting expression has been made on love, kiss and lip.Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austinRose Marie Juan-austin (8/31/2019 12:39:00 AM)

    Magnificent write from the Poet's Pen of a
    one of a kind Poet.
    Another masterpiece.
    Onto my Poem List.
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  • Khalid Saifullah (8/30/2019 11:24:00 PM)

    A great poem, every line shows mastery of the poet. (Report)Reply

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  • Gajanan MishraGajanan Mishra (8/30/2019 12:02:00 AM)

    Listen to and to adore, great lines (Report)Reply

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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (8/29/2019 11:57:00 PM)

    You conjured magic with this breathtaking love song, dear Akhtar Sir! I have surely enjoyed a very lot! Thank YOU!
    A 10 full score and much much more. Up toMyPoemList.
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  • Aniruddha PathakAniruddha Pathak (8/29/2019 11:55:00 PM)

    It is love when eyes feel the touch,
    ears begin to see who sings,
    and the skin all over smells the fragrance of love.
    This is how I felt after reading 'Leave it for the Starry Eyes'.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 29, 2019

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 29, 2019


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